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Honeymoon

She was born and raised
in the hills of Tennessee,
so was he;
high school sweethearts
who were newlyweds,
when war broke out.
He enlisted and was shipped
right away;
She went to work
in a munitions depot stateside
. . . . and waited.
Their honeymoon was
lost to World War II,
although they
and their love did survive;
but, they were never
young and innocent again.

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Fox Confessor Votes: +0	I really liked this poem. It is very simple, but it tells a story and the consequences... Keep writing! report abuse vote down vote up


RamRaideR 69.A.D. Votes: +0	there is nothing wrong with the writing everone is different with there own style what they feel comfortable with,atleast its your poem,nobody else can say it has the same meaning it has for you,people interperate things diffrently,i like all poetry really,i do like rhyming better,when i started writing i was told to change it around etc,but i found that hard,its whatever your comfortable with.peAce. report abuse vote down vote up


kid Votes: +0	Only one example of rhyming (unintended?) in the whole poem. I was whelmed. It would have to be 'free' - it's certainly not good enough to sell. And I know more about poetry than the writer, that's for sure. That unintentional bit of rhyme jars with the rest of it. And as for the response below...absolute pants. report abuse vote down vote up

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