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LOVESONG

Open the curtains,
turn the lamp down
so the moonlight
through your nightgown
draws a perfectly delicious
silhouette,

Do not lie down
upon the bed yet,
let me look at you
and repent
the times when was
mystified and fooled,

As you glide to me
through darkness,
contrasted in the starkness,
I see shadows and the caster,
and my heartbeat
fury, faster…

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Annabell... Votes: +0	HouHou! (I mean Oh la la). I like it, in spite of the typo....No, I mean I like it especially because of the typo. report abuse vote down vote up


Daisy♥s Silhouette On The Shade Votes: +0	Two Silhouettes On the Shade......said to myself, you're on the wrong block, LOL TD, I like your new poems, your old poems, your poems that you say need an overhaul........I might not respond often......but I read, and enjoy, them all!!! Edit: You just inspired yet another new name....with this beautiful love poem!! P.S. Edit: I changed it again!! report abuse vote down vote up


Sptfyr Votes: +0	Lovely poem, elegant and tastefully rendered. The image you create has an ethereal feel to it. report abuse vote down vote up


MishMole... Votes: +0	^ The lady says you look stunning ^ Fantasizing in Sheil's wardrobe again? report abuse vote down vote up


cynthia s Votes: +0	I do not say this at all lightly. I think I'm going to swoon. Robert Browning never penned a better love poem than this. (Fanning myself from the spontaneous hot flash). report abuse vote down vote up


carpedie... Votes: +0	Yeah, the imagery is great...and the anticipation is good too. report abuse vote down vote up


Elaine P Votes: +0	You need to include this somehow. (S2 L5 = "the times when I was...). report abuse vote down vote up


Evadne Terra Votes: +0	And you make me long to be the one who hears the melody...damn that's good. report abuse vote down vote up


CapnTink... Votes: +0	what a beautiful poem!! absolutely stunning! report abuse vote down vote up


Reenie: Mom of Marine Votes: +0	This is goooood! You missed mine about rain.... It doesn't compare, though. report abuse vote down vote up


Dondi Votes: +0	Ya did good report abuse vote down vote up


Loraine A Votes: +0	No, it sucks and it doesn't make sense OR rhyme...Sorry report abuse vote down vote up

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